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« Thread Started on Jan 17, 2006, 8:17pm » | |
yes i have some writting stuff i have done, read it and tell me what you think,
There was a time long, long ago. A time when we thought we were Gods. A time when all we cared about was doing well on tests and passing for our future. We were taken to new levels and experienced new innovations such as studying and home work. This all started as something small, and at the dawn of our prime, we have reached our peak, and work grew ever harder. Those who followed work experienced something such as homework and tests. As time went on, people who sill went on to this phenomenon experienced stuff as book reports and term papers. Little did we know, we drew ever closer to our self manufactured downfall, and we were left staring into the darkness, into the laughing face of madness.
Looking out your window
On to a moon wet rainy day
Main St.
Under a sleek, grey, afternoon sky
The light on your face
Is soft and dim
Under the lace curtains
And the streets are empty
There was a flash and a rumble
Giant wooden ships
On a black evening grey
Capped with foam
I guess "we" were wrong not every dog has his day, some just die without a name, and some die with no cause, and some die fighting for others, and we all realize in the end, was the path we all took was the right one, it got me where i am now, but did i make the right choice, and in that split second before you wither away, your whole life flashes by you, from when you were born, kid, teen, pre adult, adult, elder, now, and you go back and see all the mistakes you have made, and what you could have done to fix them, and then you realize, u cant, what has happened has happened, and you cant change it, so then your life ends up miserable, but you go back, and see all your friends, the ones you hung with, and played with, shared your feelings with, and depended on, and see that, not everyone can live by themselves, we all depend on people, in order to live, and then we all see that a day of happiness is better then a lifetime of misery, and that day of happiness is the day we all finally get to “live”.
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« Reply #1 on Jan 17, 2006, 9:45pm » | |
Please use the "modify" button, its right above in your post, so please DO NOT double post.
Very nice writing i wouls say 8/10.
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« Reply #2 on Mar 26, 2006, 5:45pm » | |
yah interesting man.
and that was a crapload to read.
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« Reply #3 on Jul 14, 2006, 5:46pm » | |
heres some more stuff of my writting,
people in life canot move on unles they get help from people. people avoid or ignore other people becase they are not needed. when help is needed then the people who can help are noticed. unfortinalelly, this is like this with everyone, and no matter how long you try and gain trust for people. they will always see past you unless they want something from you.
"There will come a day when they all will need me, and when that day comes, I wont be there to help, I'll be busy being left alone and forgotten."- my quote
Ya whatever, we all know its fake, our lives, its all a sugarcoated doughnut, on the outside its nice and sweet, but on the inside its plain and bland, what ever happened to "life" did we all just throw it away for some 2-bit act, or did we throw it away cause we dont believe anymore, the hell, what happened to all of us, where did we all go.
thats it for now
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